[Senseless Fictions]

Mi segundo poema en ingles, enjoy-it
[All I need is just paper and a pen =)]




Sometimes I want to give everything in the first breath
but i know I can't get that naked anymore
Because it hurts so much
And all I can imagine es your mouth singing me thoose songs
Certainly kissing my deepest sorrows
Giving me one more desired lie
Giving me one last hope, that I'm not in the right place...
Again
And maybe there is another place to keep my caresses alive
but it is in a lost time
Sometimes I feel so damn defenceless faced with senseless, futureless fictions

Ojos: Feñita (lalalalateodioperotusabesquepodriaquerertemuchomas"amiga"lalala)
Palabras: Mario

4 comentarios:

Lindos tus poemas!!!!!!!!


Besitos!!! =]

7/26/2007 10:09 PM  

Hey q lindas tus letras
me gustaron
y llegaron mucho..

saludos

sigue inspirandote
chau!!


=D

9/09/2007 8:35 PM  

Hola:

Hay algunas faltas de ortografía, pero el poema es muy bueno. Mi opinión no vale mucho porque no soy lector, pero me transmite algo.

El diseño de tu page me gusta mucho, igual que la page de millie. Algún día aprenderé a usar los blogspot.

Cuidate.

http://kraken.cl.kz/

9/10/2007 7:02 PM  

You don't have to "look for"... it comes when it is the rigth time, the rigthplace and the rigth person.....Love you

3/25/2008 11:31 AM  

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